The characters are as lively as ever and the LBGTQ+ characters are represented fairly well I think. There might of been small parts peppered that were slightly slower pacing in The Heart Forger, but overall the pacing was much better than the first installment. The story was phenomenal and way better pacing than in the first book The Bone Witch. This should not have been…but FISH! ( Fk It Sht Happens). It is a conversation Tea and Fox have at some point and it was important stuff too. It’s like re-training my brain all over again.Īnyways, the dialogue mess ups I think happen 3-5 times? I am just really remembering the one where it was a really big mess up. I am also finding out the more I read the more easier it’s becoming.
I may have to re-read it a couple of times, but then it clicks. My brain has a hard time with most writing styles in general, but I have acclimated to navigate through them through out the years. The way they had formatted it it sounded like the same character was still talking, but you really knew it wasn’t. I had a hard time unraveling some scenes with dialogue that should have been said by the other character. It was chapter 16 or so that had major errors. The errors are anywhere from chapters 10-20…give or take. I am not going to take any starts away for the poor editing job within this book. Let me start by saying this book deserved five stars as per my GoodReads account where it is stated so.
I could put in a spoiler warning like this? Meh, same thing. This is because so that I can have a spoiler warning before anyone reads my review. As always, and I am going to do this probably for every full book review, is write one or two paragraphs of an intro or something.
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